Final Film Feedback

• The narrative seems to go on for a while- and perhaps what she was saying could have been made more interesting. -I believe this is true as well because we added extra bits to the script last minute, which means it wasn't up to standard with the majority of the original script.
  
• The last shot wasn't completely clear of what was going on. The only way they knew what was happening is due to the "Daddy, no"
• The park scenes were very emotional.
• The twist in the story was interesting
• The hide and seek scene was nicely done.
• The title sequence works well with the music